Archivist 1: reviews

I know I haven’t been as engaged with promoting and chatting about (etc) my newest release, Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1) as I usually am – I thought the headache was bad before my Covid shot, but boy, was I sadly wrong (and I have my second shot booked on July 21. Ugh.) – so I’m even more overwhelmed and excited by how my lovely readers have embraced the newest offshoot of the Adept Universe. Your support – reviews, retweets, shares, photos, etc – means so much, and never more than when I’m still seriously struggling (it’s been a ridiculously hard 18 months for the world at large)!

On Amazon USA alone, Invoking Infinity already has more reviews/ratings in the month and half that it has been available than the bulk of my other books. Yes, the bulk. And word of mouth is everything. Everything!

Thank you, thank you.

Archivist 1: early reviews

I’ve been struggling with a crazy, insanely ramped-up headache that might be from my Covid19 (Moderna) shot?? Or might be from the HRT (Estradot) that I was taking to try to alleviate the perimenopause hell that has engulfed my life for almost two years now. I removed the patch just under a week ago to try to break the headache, so it’s down to its more typical low roar now. And of course, all the other symptoms are flooding back. Grrr!!

Anyway! That’s a long preamble to explain that, while I should be promoting my new release, Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1), I have instead been belatedly doing taxes and trying to keep myself somewhat functional. However! during that time, Michael has been reading some of my lovely reader reviews to me. And you all seriously rock (double thanks to everyone sharing those reviews online, since apparently, I’m shirking my marketing duties).

Here is one of Michael’s favs (he especially loved the gated courtyard comment):

Review from Amazon USA. Thank you, D. Stoneman!!

Here is one of my favs (b/c six more words required is dumb!) 😀 :

Review via Amazon USA. Thank you, Mimi!!

Click here to read all of the absolutely lovely reviews on Amazon (all countries).

Via Kobo. Um, Caroline … just being mentioned in the same grouping of sentences … okay, same paragraph … with MY fav authors thrills me!!!

Review via Kobo. Thanks, Caroline!

All the reviews over on Goodreads are lovely, but I’m so pleased that Micca thinks Awakening Infinity (Archivist 0) adds to the story as well!!

Review via Goodreads. Thank you Micca!

Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to leave a review/rating on their preferred retailer! Your support means so, so much, especially when I’m not putting out my best effort myself.

I’m so glad that you all appear to be enjoying Dusk’s series. More Dusk and Sisu and Kellan and Ravine (etc) to come! Book two is all outlined and the first two chapters have been written … and, seriously, the ending of book two is going to be amazing (if I say so myself).

Archivist 1: Chapter One, Part One

Balancing the four lattes I’d bought from the coffee shop around the corner on a Tupperware container filled with freshly baked blueberry cinnamon buns, I crossed through the darkened offices of the magical antiquities section of the National Museum of Ireland.

The nonmagical museum collections were actually distributed throughout Dublin, but the two main buildings — natural history and archaeology — were housed next to each other in the heart of the city, only blocks away from Saint Patrick’s Cathedral, Trinity College, and the large park of St. Stephen’s Green.

Caught up in moving and prepping for my new job, I hadn’t had a chance to really explore the city yet. So I’d walked the twenty minutes to work, finding the early-November morning warm enough that I’d taken off my brown leather jacket and slung it over one arm, keeping my backpack secured over both shoulders, as always. I’d purloined the coat from my mother’s closet, so technically it was vintage. A favorite dark-brown sweater, plaid skirt, tights, and laced brown boots completed my outfit.

The exterior door to the magical archive was tucked away at the side of the archaeology museum, which was built in the Victorian Palladian style — complete with an impressively grand colonnaded entrance that fronted a twenty-meter high domed rotunda. The unremarkable steel door that led to the archive was unmarked and locked, but it had yielded to my touch with only a slight push of magic. No automated lights had flickered on when I entered, so I left it that way.

I’d gotten up at 4:00 a.m. to bake the cinnamon buns, which were still warm and sticky. The lattes were for my new employees, though having never met them, I had no idea if they even drank coffee. Making the buns in the temporary kitchen currently set up in the basement of my newly inherited house had been challenging, but I wanted to meet my co-workers and start the first Monday of my first official job on the best of terms.

‘House’ still wasn’t the right word. My new estate. Palace? Manor? 

A name would really be helpful. Something that encompassed the scope of the estate. But I’d been a little too busy upending my life and overseeing the revitalization of the main house to come up with anything suitable. And my five-year-old brother’s suggestions were a little over the top. Sisu, who had a habit of changing his own name on a whim, was the son of a demigod and had to be continually reminded that he was neither invincible nor the defender of all.

The so-called inheritance of the estate was part of my cover for being in Dublin in the first place. As was the job I was starting today. All subparts of a larger task given to me by the guardian dragons — to live and work among the Adept as a dragon archivist, posing as a Godfrey witch.

I was well qualified for the head curator position I was to undertake — though I had crammed about two years of studying into the last month in order to feel that way. But the spy mission was another thing altogether.

Hence, opening with the offering of coffee and cinnamon buns. My research had informed me that bringing occasional treats to the office was a customary bonding ritual among colleagues.

I crossed through the open office area, my eyes easily adjusting to the low light. Four desks occupied the corners of the large room, some neat and tidy, others piled with books, papers, and supplies. Shelving units and filing cabinets filled the walls behind the desks.

An enclosed office took up about two-thirds of the far wall. A name I couldn’t read from this distance was stenciled into the obscured glass of the top half of the door. A clear path cut from the main entrance through the other four desks toward that door, with a corridor stretching farther into the building on the left, presumably leading to the bathroom and some sort of kitchen or eating area.

Energy radiated through the floor from heavy-duty wards, informing me that the main magical collection was archived below ground. As witches typically did when securing objects of power, sourcing their magic most often from the earth.

As I crossed through the main room, I wondered if there was also a more public collection. Something that the Adepts who called Dublin home could access without requesting specific items through one of the archivists or the librarian. If there wasn’t, I’d need to look into the logistics of opening a small viewing space or even a library.

As I approached the office door, the name emblazoned across its glass came into focus — Celeste Cameron. It wasn’t my own name, but the title printed underneath was mine — head curator. 

So I’d found my office. Celeste Cameron had been murdered in an incident with a soul sucker entity over six years ago. An entity so powerful that it had also severely hurt my Great-Uncle Jamal when he’d been called in to deal with it, though he had managed to contain it.

I knew that the other employees — two archivists, a librarian, and a historian — had been maintaining the archive, but I’d been surprised to learn that neither the Byrne coven nor the witches Convocation had yet found anyone suitable to fill Celeste’s position. Before the guardian dragons had arranged to appoint me. Not that anyone knew the guardian part of my assignment, excepting the head of the witches Convocation, Pearl Godfrey. The witch who oversaw all other witches was now Auntie Pearl to me and my brother Sisu. On paper at least.

With the lattes and cinnamon buns balanced in my left hand, I reached for the doorknob of the office, feeling the energy radiating around the door. Possibly a ward — but the office might also have been sealed after Celeste Cameron died. The fact that her name was still printed across the glass made the second option seem likely.

Power hummed under my hand, but the door didn’t yield to my touch. I waited, feeling my way through the tenor of the energy, trying to assess its strength and purpose.

I could have waited until my employees arrived. But I’d come to work thirty minutes early to get a sense of the offices before meeting the people who were going to look at me as if I were simply a twenty-five-year-old witch who’d just come into her magical inheritance. A name and expectations came with that inheritance, but I’d have to prove I was qualified for the position I’d landed in.

Also, I had no doubt that the Byrne witches I’d already met, plus the members of the Conall pack helping renovate the estate, had already whispered bits of information about me to their friends and family.

So, since I couldn’t actually control what other people said about me, or Sisu, I wouldn’t worry about it.

Well, I wouldn’t worry about it much.

I had still gotten up way too early to bake. To make a friendly first impression.

I twisted my hand gently, forcing the magic locking the door to yield to me. It resisted. 

I applied slightly more pressure, but carefully. A broken door and shredded wards would result in questions — specifically, the question of why I hadn’t waited to be given permission to enter.

But I didn’t want to start out asking for permission to do my job, which was why I’d also given the boundary wards that had sealed the exterior entrance a slight nudge when I’d entered. Manipulating wards, or even breaking through them, wasn’t beyond the abilities of any archivist talented enough to be a head curator, even a witch or sorcerer. And though I might have been still feeling my way through all the other aspects of the new life that had been thrust upon me, I was a good archivist. 

I would eventually be a great one.

And all of that started today.

Magic stirred within my backpack. A press of warmth between my shoulder blades from Infinity, my personal archive. Not a warning. That always felt like more of a buzz. Encouragement, maybe?

Smiling, I pressed a touch of my own power to the door handle — and it yielded. The door popped open, swinging inward to reveal a large, dark office. The windows on the far side of the room were heavily shuttered. Which made sense, because now that the door was open, I could feel a humming energy emanating from the dozens upon dozens of magical items that occupied bookshelves running floor to ceiling along both adjacent walls.

I could feel the magic contained within Celeste Cameron’s office even before I’d stepped through the secondary ward that stretched invisibly across the open doorway.

No.

It was my office now.

And either the wards were weak, or they hadn’t been made to block the level of sensitivity I brought to the job. A higher sensitivity even than most other archivists — whether witches, werewolves, sorcerers, necromancers, or dragons — all of whom typically ranked as highly sensitive to magical items and creatures. It was practically the first line of the job description, right before a natural resistance to such magic. Otherwise that archivist’s career would be cut dreadfully short.

I stepped through the doorway. Energy clung to me, trying to taste my magic, then slid off when it couldn’t gain purchase. Because it was difficult to ward against a dragon. We were magic, descended from demigods. Not that it couldn’t be done. But the witch who’d built the wards would have needed to know that dragons existed in the first place, outside of morality tales and mythology.

The boundary wards yielded completely. My front foot landed on a worn rug set just inside the door to protect the oak hardwood. And the buzzing of all the magic objects on the shelves increased.

A wide grin swamped my face.

This place already felt like home. Literally. The library at my mother’s estate was filled with tiny touches of energy, just like —

Something slammed into the side of my head, getting instantly tangled in my already wild hair and obscuring my eyesight. Tiny claws tried to hook into my skin, failing at first, but then finding a hold on my bottom lip. The creature latched onto my right upper canine and started nibbling and suckling.

Yes. On my tooth.

I laughed.

Still somehow balancing the coffee and cinnamon buns in my left hand, I gently attempted to pull the creature off me. It clung with a tenacious strength that was usually only reserved for the starving. And since going for my teeth was a bit of a clue as to what I was dealing with, I understood that this creature did have a rather specialized diet.

I managed to transfer its front claws from my lip to my forefinger, tugging it away from me so I could peer at it. It assessed me with wide, dark-orbed eyes.

An imp. Known as a tooth fairy among various cultures. ‘Imp’ was a wide classification for magical creatures — some with wings, some without — that ranged in size from smaller than brownies to larger than pixies. This imp was the length of my forearm. Its eyes dominated its light-gray-skinned face, except for the overly large mismatched teeth of its lipless mouth.

“That wasn’t nice,” I said teasingly, holding it loosely so I didn’t accidentally crush it. “You could have said hello.”

The imp narrowed its eyes at me, then chittered discontentedly. It was unlikely it understood English, or spoke any language I could understand, but my tone should have — 

The imp sprang free from my grasp, attempting to launch off the coffees and the Tupperware balanced in my other hand as it made its escape.

Four lattes in large paper cups with plastic lids didn’t make for a terribly stable surface.

Scrambling for footing, the imp leaped for the nearest shelf.

The lattes slammed into my chest and shoulder, lids flying off to dump hot coffee all over me.

Shrieking — even a dragon wasn’t completely impervious to heat — I lost hold of the cinnamon buns as well.

Hot liquid soaked into my hair and sweater, scalding the skin of my neck and collarbone, then dripping down my plaid skirt, all over my favorite brown boots and the rug.

The imp watched me warily from the shelf at eye level to my left. It chittered again, disconcerted.

“Yeah, that also wasn’t nice,” I said, sighing.

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Archivist Series: Kellan

The second of the illustrations I’ve commissioned from Nicole Deal for the Archivist series is a bit of a spoiler, so I thought I might as well include an excerpt from the first time Dusk lays eyes on Kellan as well (see below). Working with Nicole has been amazing. I love, love her take on characters that currently only live in my head. You can find Dusk and Sisu’s illustration here.

Kellan Conall from the Archivist Series by Meghan Ciana Doidge. Illustration by Nicole Deal.

You will find Nicole’s ridiculously gorgeous rendering of Kellan (and the twin wolves) tucked between two scenes in chapter 2 of Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1). It will be in full colour in the eBook version (unless your eReader doesn’t do colour) and grayscale in the paperback. The book releases on May 25, 2021 (SO SOON NOW!!)

*** MILD SPOILER ALERT ***

Though he was some sort of shapeshifter, the stranger looming over a temporary workbench in the middle of what was going to be the main kitchen was definitely not Bethany. He was working with some sort of tool — sanding, maybe?

He looked up as I entered, instantly and steadily meeting my gaze. The plastic sealing the doorway fell back into place behind me.

The air was slightly dusty. Bright pockets of light from work lamps set around the large space gave the room a bright white glow. The sounds of Sisu, Neve, and Lile chattering away in the dining room filtered through more thick layers of plastic encasing a doorway on the wall to my left.

I recognized the stranger, though I’d never met him. In his late twenties, he was the spitting image of his sister, Gitta — and yet somehow looked nothing like her at all. 

Kellan Conall.

Tall, broad-shouldered, and so well muscled that his T-shirt had to be cutting off his circulation at the upper biceps, he was one of the largest men I’d ever seen. And I knew plenty of warrior dragons, as well as the treasure keeper of the guardian dragons — Pulou. Though not as tall, Pulou had a body like a grizzly bear’s from the neck down — and looked the part as well, thanks to the enormous mink fur coat he always wore.

Kellan’s hair was dark brown, his skin a lighter brown. And his eyes were the same strange golden-green as the twins. Magic flared in those eyes as he took me in, staring at me as forthrightly as I was staring at him. His nostrils flared as he turned off and set down the tool he’d been wielding.

The sound in the room faded, including the chatter from the dining room. The moment seemed to physically stretch before us, as if some sort of spell had been triggered. Yet the warm but completely disconnected sensation I was feeling wasn’t magic. At least nothing remotely conventional.

“Dusk Godfrey,” I finally said. Was it possible to feel heavy, as if I was rooted to the plywood-covered floor, and yet lightheaded at the same time?

Apparently, yes.

He grinned, revealing white teeth. But the expression did nothing to soften all the hard planes of his face. He looked as though he could run through a brick wall, through multiple brick walls, without getting a scratch, let alone faltering.

That probably wasn’t a particularly attractive quality to anyone except for myself … my hormones? My magic?

And yes, I was still staring at him. And he at me.

“My employer,” he said. His accent was lilting yet still deep, as if his voice or the words themselves were pulled from the depths of his being.

There was something seriously wrong with me.

“Kellan Conall,” he said, pulling off his gloves.

Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1), Chapter Two

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Archivist 1: A collector of rarities

“Doran isn’t going to attempt to harm me,” I said calmly. “I’m a valuable asset. And he isn’t stupid.” My blood was also poison to him, if he could even sink his teeth through my dragon hide. He’d only claimed two hundred years though, so I didn’t think he was powerful enough to do so. Yet.

I, however, could skewer him through the heart with an exceedingly powerful bone blade before he even saw me lunge forward.

Not that I went around stabbing magical beings in the heart.

I was a collector of rarities after all.

– excerpt from Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1), Chapter Five, fourth draft

Archivist 1: update and excerpt

I just finished my first full pass on the story editor’s notes for Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1). Next, I’ll do another complete pass, smoothing the prose and making certain I haven’t inserted anything strange (i.e. continuity errors, etc) while working through the editor’s suggested changes/additions.

The book is now 104k. That’s long. I prefer to stay under 95k myself. But, the editor hasn’t recommended any cuts. Yet.

To celebrate getting through the last two weeks (which have been seriously, seriously rough for me headache-wise) I thought I’d share an excerpt from Chapter One and Dusk’s first day of work. I hope you enjoy it!

Leather-covered sketchbook (aka Infinity) created by Mille Cuirs. Ink: Caroube de Chypre by Jacques Herbin. Fountain pen: Parker Sonnet Ciselé Silver

I stepped through the door. Energy clung to me, trying to taste my magic, then slid off when it couldn’t gain purchase.

Like I’d said, it was difficult to ward against a dragon. We were magic, descended from demi-gods. Not that it couldn’t be done, but the witch who’d built the wards would have needed to have known that dragons existed in the first place. Outside of morality tales and mythology, of course.

The boundary wards yielded completely. My front foot landed on a worn rug set just inside the door to protect the oak hardwood. And the buzzing of all the magic objects on the shelves increased.

A wide grin swamped my face.

This already felt like home.

Literally. The library at my mother’s estate was filled with tiny touches of energy just like —

Something slammed into the side of my head, getting instantly tangled in my already wild hair and obscuring my eyesight. Tiny claws tried to hook into my skin, failing but then finding hold on my bottom lip. The creature latched onto my right upper canine and started nibbling and suckling.

Yes. On my tooth.

I laughed.

Still balancing the coffee and cinnamon buns in my left hand, I gently attempted to pull the creature off me. It clung with a tenacious strength that was usually only reserved for the starving.

And since going for my teeth was a bit of a clue as to what I was dealing with, this creature did have a rather specialized diet.

I managed to transfer its front claws from my lip to my forefinger, tugging it away from my teeth so I could peer at it. It assessed me with wide, dark-orbed eyes.

An imp of some sort. A wide classification for magical creatures — with or without wings — that ranged in size. Smaller than brownies but larger than pixies. This imp was the length of my forearm. Its eyes dominated its light-gray skinned face, except for the overly large mismatched teeth of its lipless mouth.

“That wasn’t nice,” I said teasingly, holding it loosely so I didn’t accidentally crush it. “You could have said hello.”

The imp narrowed its eyes at me, then it chittered discontentedly. It was unlikely it understood English, or spoke any language I could understand, but my tone should — 

The imp sprung free from my grasp, attempting to launch off the coffees and Tupperware balanced in my other hand as it made its escape.

Four lattes in large paper cups and plastic lids didn’t make for a terribly stable surface.

Scrambling for footing, the imp leaped for the nearest shelf.

The lattes slammed into my chest and shoulder, lids flying off, and dumping hot coffee all over me.

Shrieking — even a dragon wasn’t completely impervious to heat — I lost hold of the cinnamon buns as well.

Hot liquid soaked into my hair and sweater, scalding the skin of my neck and collarbone, then dripping down my plaid skirt, all over my favorite brown boots, and the rug.

The imp watched me warily from the shelf at eye level to my left. It chittered quietly, disconcerted.

“Yeah, that also wasn’t nice,” I said sighing.

– from Invoking Infinity (Archivist 1), Chapter One, fourth draft

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In other news, guess who didn’t actually hit publish on the paperback for Awakening Infinity (Archivist 0)? Ugh, me! I’m sorry. It should be available very soon.